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Der Klanger Ihrer Flugel by ~voyavoda:iconvoyavoda:



Magnificent, the moment i laid eyes/
Not knowing i was beholding an angel disguised/
Music flooded my mind as time was delayed/
immobilized by her grace, left with a gaping gaze/
Entranced by immaculate beauty as she passed/
Enthralled by beauty never surpassed/
The corridor echoed with the sound of her wings/
Overtaken by the joy she so constantly brings/
My first memory of her is the one of this day/
But sadness now entrails for she has flown away/

                                           ~fin~
©2008-2009 ~voyavoda
:iconvoyavoda:

Author's Comments

Der Klanger Ihrer Flügel: the meaning of the title is The Sound of Her Wings

this is basically the memory of my first experience of love at first sight. i really did not capture as much detail as i wanted to in terms of graphical description, but i think the emotional aspect of this poem is ok.

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:icontareck-aresch:
Correct it's: Der Klang Ihrer Flügel, but you can also write ihrer (non-capital), depending on if you mean multiple persons/things (then it's ihrer) or one particular person/thing (then Ihrer).
:iconal3va:
right, but dont mind it! i think this poem is really and i mean really good! i like it :) really sounds as if ure in love (and transporting [cant find the right word right now] this feeling is the only thing that matters).

what a coincidence! just yesterday i meet two really beautiful girls and also got the feeling that i some kind fell in love.
:iconvoyavoda:
thanxx so much. i truly was and still am in love. i put so much emotion into it, but it is not nearly the scope and magnitude of what i felt on that day.
:iconartofdutch:
And in time her shadow returns.
When the fruit is ripe
and the lesson been learned.
So stay awhile and you may find
Angelwings that flutter your mind
and burning beauty may enchant.
Descend to you without a sound.
To call you to eternities arms
and comfort you for all your wrongs.


Thanks for the fav on mine. Good on you bud:)

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:iconvoyavoda:
that is awesome. i wish i had the skills. i still don't like the one i wrote because it doesn't fully capture the moment that spawned the peom.

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自分を世界さえも変えてしまえそうな...
:iconartofdutch:
Rather capture the angel and wright the poetry later...

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Destroy the norm & Create the new

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